Today we’ll look at a blog by golf pro Dave Smallwood.
Right off the bat – I’m not a golfer. So this is also a challenge to all you golfers out there: what does this blog look like to you, from the point of view of someone who really knows about this noble sport?
I’ll look at it from the point of view of a potential client, who might want to get her feet wet with a few golf lessons. What does Dave Smallwood have to offer me?
Focus and readability
When I first chanced upon the host site – the Ontario Golf site – I saw the word “instruction” right away and made a beeline for it. Check – I’m in the right place. Well done! Dave doesn’t confuse his readers.
The next thing I noticed that his paragraphs are nice and short. The longest is six lines long. I’m not intimidated by big blocks of text, which makes me want to read on. Great!
Images: Unprofessional - but they do the trick
He provides pictures to illustrate the text. While I thought this was a great idea – apart from illustration, it also breaks up the monotony of text – I would suggest he use better images. The colours of Dave’s images tend to be drab and a bit unfocused. So there’s room for improvement in that area, although in Dave’s situation, it’s better to have any image than none.
Why is that? First of all, in his situation, the information that the illustration provides is more important than how he presents it (content, here, is more important than form). For other professionals – photographers, for example, or fashion designers – form is almost more important than content, and posting images of such quality would be an absolute no-no. It all depends on the industry.
The other reason why the below-par quality of Dave’s images may not matter so much is because the rest of the web site provides a relatively good and professional visual presentation, so a few mediocre photographs can be forgiven.
It goes without saying, of course, that we will always advise you to only use best-quality images on any of the blogging projects that we help you manage.
Headlines that go the distance
I like the headline of one of his posts, “Greater Club Head Lag Means Greater Distance”. Dave says, “It is likely that 98 % of all golfers have no idea what the title to this article means. Regardless, all are very aware that they would like greater distance.”
That’s one of the secrets of a good headline: Marry a desire (“greater distance”) with a mystery (“greater club head lag”).
What desires do your clients have? What mystery tip do you have for them?